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Friday, 3 May 2019

neverland

this week we have been learning how to create a piece of writing using a picture to help us. first we had a class brainstorm on what the picture was about, then we brainstormed some adjectives. finely 
we started our writing. I am sharing it with you, please leave me a comment. thanks!


                                                        Never land

                                                Chapter one

It was a sunny day when I  had to pack my bag and go on the  bus.
I sat down,  I went from home  to the airport and went on a plane and flew from Christchurch to Never land .






                                               Chapter two
I was finely there,  it looked old and wreaked there were alien bird people. Then I heard a wispier I diffident now were it was coming. from and the voice went again  and again. I followed the voice and it was coming from the forest I looked and the person told me her name it was Willow and she asked what my name was and I told her it was Butterfly Butterscotch. and I asked where we were and she. said we were in Never land I got scared cause she. said never land. She said it was the end because she said whoever is on Never land will get sucked in to a portal and go to a different land. in ten seconds I took my last breath it smelled like fresh air. and then I got sucked in …….