I am a Year 7 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
we have been doing lots of information gathering about the Amazon Rainforest once we gathered the information we learnt how to create a piece of opinion writing. it was really good to be able to explain how i felt.
Hi Mereana, I'm Nikita, and I liked how you expressed your emotions while writing, I think the information interests me, and I hope to see more of this satisfying information from you, did you learn more about this topic? what kind of protection for animals would you give, if you could? Kind Regards Nikita Yaldhurst Model School.
Kia Ora I'm Jorja from Yaldhurst Model School.
ReplyDeleteThis is amazing because it tells you a lot of things about the Amazon rainforest fires.
The facts you have used are really good. I feel sad for the animals too.
Maybe next time you could write a little bit more.
(: Kind Regards Jorja :)
Hi Mereana,
ReplyDeleteI'm Nikita, and I liked how you expressed your emotions while writing, I think the information interests me, and I hope to see more of this satisfying information from you, did you learn more about this topic? what kind of protection for animals would you give, if you could?
Kind Regards
Nikita
Yaldhurst Model School.