neverland

this week we have been learning how to create a piece of writing using a picture to help us. first we had a class brainstorm on what the picture was about, then we brainstormed some adjectives. finely 
we started our writing. I am sharing it with you, please leave me a comment. thanks!


                                                        Never land

                                                Chapter one

It was a sunny day when I  had to pack my bag and go on the  bus.

I sat down,  I went from home  to the airport and went on a plane and flew from Christchurch to Never land .

                                               Chapter two

I was finely there,  it looked old and wreaked there were alien bird people. Then I heard a wispier I diffident now were it was coming. from and the voice went again  and again. I followed the voice and it was coming from the forest I looked and the person told me her name it was Willow and she asked what my name was and I told her it was Butterfly Butterscotch. and I asked where we were and she. said we were in Never land I got scared cause she. said never land. She said it was the end because she said whoever is on Never land will get sucked in to a portal and go to a different land. in ten seconds I took my last breath it smelled like fresh air. and then I got sucked in …….

About Me

WALT describe ourselves and what we are interested in.

Kia ora my name is Mereana. I am a Year 5 my teacher’s name is Whaea Heather.
 I enjoy playing with my friends I like lol’s.  My favourite thing to do is art. I play Hot poatato
on the trampoline on the weekend. I am in a bilingual class and I can speak te reo maori.

the menus

walt' Using the picture as a prompt write 100 words telling me what has been going on

Long ago  there was people who were trying to take  the hole city over. But the army came to stop them  then they ran away

And ran into the florist. But no one was there then they came back

And tried again. But normal people came and tried to scare them away but they got  scared away. Because they where trying to take something but they got scared away.

Then the people that were trying to take over the hole city went to a  different

Place and they didn't like it so they went bake to the city and stole……..

relaxing

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kupu ahua.

E rua ōna parirau.

He karaka tona tae

E wha ona waewae

E rua ona.

Bitsbourd.

I got 100% on bitsbourd with time in maori.