The old railroad
Chapter one
It had been many years since the shrill shriek of a steam train puffing along the track had been heard in these parts.
The Northern Railroad had been discontinued after the great disaster on June 11th, 1911. Ever since that day, the Railroad company had been nothing but a distant memory, a story to be told around the campfire late into the night
As the group sat around their newly constructed camp listening to the crackle of the flames as they licked up into the night there minds wondered back to the stories they had heard from their fathers so absorbed were they in the moment and the memorising glow of the fire it was hard to tell if the shrill shriek coming from the distance was part of their imaginations...
For years and years even centuries the axact train hasn't been going since June 11th, 1911, and now it is June 11th, 2020, so it has been a long time since it disappeared. But one day I heard a train but it wasn't the axact train. It it it was a ghost train. Well I know it is a ghost train because no one was stirring it. It was a nightmare. It was like flouting because of a ghost. I heard the ghost say boo one of the ghosts pulled the string and it sounded loud chug a chug a chu chu I tried running away . I was getting chased by bulls but it didn't work. Nothing worked. Then I got caught by the ghost and oh it wasn't fun I keep going up and poʍu it was hurting it felt like I was getting stabbed in the back I tried to get out but it was hard since im going up and poʍu then all of a sudden the train stopped and I went to the front off the train and bagned my head on it BANG!. Oh that hurt then I hopped out and found I was at a ghost town I thought it would be something scarier than this I tried to escape but before I could I had to get something from my bag it was something you use to see ghosts cause you know you can't see ghosts in the dark. and in the ghost town there were no lights so I had a device that could see ghosts. I forgot what it could but I better get going now so I was getting there and I was really nearly there but then I dropped something. So I had to go back and come back so I came back ok all I had to do was run for dear life YES i did it I can go back to camp wait camp NO not camp home back home. It will be much safer there then I won't be captured woho this was actually kinda fun. F IS FOR FRIEND’S WHO DO STUFF TOGETHER U IS FOR YOU AND ME N IS FOR ANYWHERE ANYTIME AT ALL DOWN HERE IN THE DEEP GREEN FOREST. that was what gave me in idea f is for friends friend I probably should ask to be friends then they won't captcher me ever again but I don't want to go back but it is for the best so then they won’t capture me again and that will be good so then I can have a peaceful life.
TO BE CONTINUED...
Kia ora Mereana. I like the way u used punctuation. how long did it take to fines the tuhituhi?. ween are u going to rite part 2?. Bye Bye
ReplyDeleteKia Ora Mereana,I like nhow the way that you done your tuhituhi of Chapter one & Punctuations in your tuhituhi.why do you have chapters in your story?
ReplyDeleteTo make it like a book and part 2 will probably be in a long time or this year
ReplyDeleteKia ora mereanna I like way that you used doing words and describing words on your story also I liked the part when it is like the part that I had a device that could see ghosts Ka kite also I like the way that you did lots of wirting from:Kaley
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