kia ora today I am posting my 100 word challenge piece of writing it is called Time travel to find a new home I hope you like and enjoy it and please leave a comment
I was biking around then it was too late to turn back. I was all ready to go find a new house then a portal showed up out of nowhere and I saw a. haystack on the other side it was too late to turn back now I couldn't move I was heading straight at the haystack BANG! I crashed. I looked around in the haystack and then I found a needle and. a string was connected to it. I started to wonder where it went. I thought of what to do then I started to pull the string BANG.
Hi Mereana, Your story has been left with abit of a cliffhanger. I'm intrigued to know what happened next 🤔
ReplyDeleteHi Mereana, when I read your story I felt like you were talking to me which caught my attention! I would love to see some descriptive WOW words in your writing so I could imagine I was there too! Keep up the good work bub 😊
ReplyDeletethank you
ReplyDeleteKia ora Mereana this is pretty BANGG
ReplyDeleteWhat a great story Mereana.I like that you have left the ending for the reader to decide as to what happens next.Great idea!
ReplyDeleteI can't wait to read another 100 word story from you.
Thank you for taking time out of your afternoon to do road patrol...we appreciate it😊.
Kia ora Mereana.
ReplyDeleteI am just leaving a comment to let you know that I have had a look at your blog today.I can't wait to see your next learning post.
GREAT confident voice at road patrol yesterday🙃Thank you